Workshopping with Kerrin McCadden


Workshop in progress. Photo by Ma’ayan D’Antonio

By, Ma’ayan D’Antonio

Kerrin McCadden, is the author of Landscape with Plywood Silhouettes, winner of the Vermont Book Award and the New Issues Poetry Prize. As well as a resident of Montpelier. Kerrin held a workshop for reinventing poetry, a way to revise poetry. The workshop took place at the Kellogg-Hubbard Library on Monday, April 16. Kerrin, humble as she was introduced, wanted to know the participants’ names and where they are with their poetry. As each in turn said their name, they all talked in depth about where they are with their poem, someone even stated that they “accidentally wrote a poem”.

Kerrin, who mostly teaches high school kids finds it wired when grownups sit so still in front of her, “adults” she stated with a laugh. Geof Hewitt and Rick Agran (other PoemCity presenters) were also in attendance. “I’m always looking for new ways to look at poetry,” Agran said when he introduced himself.

Kerrin wanted the participants to be willing to think about how to make a poem work. As well as contemplate what makes a poem work? She explained that we don’t always know what is best for our poem, and at times a poem is not its best self. So how do you make it better? The more you push it around, the more it will tell you when it is done.

She presented an exercise to flex the ‘poet muscle’. To enable contrast try to fit five words that don’t necessarily work together in a poem, this will allow more room for the subconscious creativity to surface what we tend to keep back.

She gave different ways to reinvent a poem.

– Translate the poem into more then one language, then back to English and see what the end results bring. You might be surprised.

– Create tension by shifting focus.

– Take an old poem and write it a companion.

– Consider cutting the openings and endings of a poem and see what you are left with.

– Look at the large scale of the poem to create a new poem, you may find that the small things change into something even better- deeper.

– Change the order in which you give the information to the reader.

– Shift verb tense, try from the past to the future.

– Change the point of view from the I to him or you.

McCadden also suggests to look at a thesaurus, from different publications as well as different decades, to find new and interesting words to use.

Reinventing a Poem with Kerrin McCadden. A Workshop

On Monday, April 16, bring a draft of a poem you can’t figure out what to do with, and we will work through some revision strategies. We will share our poems and complain about them, and then we will make the biggest moves we can against their failures. I’ll bring the strategies, you bring a good-humored willingness to do more than tinker. Limited to 12 participants.

6 to 8 pm | Kellogg-Hubbard Library, 135 Main Street

Kerrin McCadden

Kerrin McCadden

Kerrin McCadden is the author of Landscape with Plywood Silhouettes, winner of the Vermont Book Award and the New Issues Poetry Prize. She is the recipient of a National Endowment for the Arts Literature Fellowship, a Vermont Studio Center Fellowship, and the Sustainable Arts Foundation Writing Award. Her poems have appeared in Best American Poetry, The Academy of American Poets’ Poem-a-Day series, Verse Daily, and in such journals as American Poetry Review, Beloit Poetry Journal, Horsethief, Prairie Schooner, and Rattle. She is the associate director of the Conference on Poetry and Teaching at The Frost Place and teaches at Montpelier High School. She lives in Montpelier, Vermont.

To register for the workshop: 

Please contact the library at (802) 223-3338.

Save the Date – Spend the month of April with us!

Come celebrate National Poetry Month with us!

Don’t miss the Kick-Off Celebration of PoemCity with Major Jackson on April 1, 2015 at 7:30pm at Farmers Night at the State House.


Goddard College Faculty: Arisa White, Michael Viszoly, Wendy Call, Janet Sylvester, Elena Georgiou

Diana Whitney

Jeffrey Ellis – part of Farmers Tell Their Stories

Kerrin McCadden

Major Jackson

Steve Cramer

Neil Shepard

Ryan Walsh

Diane Swan

Roger Weingarten

Tom Ragle

Friends of Lea Wood


Poetry Slam with Geof Hewitt

Press Here: Vermont Poetry Publishers Roundtable

Memorization Workshop with Ginger Lambert

Discussion of Robert Frost’s Poetry with Peter Gilbert

Readers Theatre: Dreams Deferred: Past, Present, Future Black Poets

Art & Poetry: Sculptural books with Elizabeth Robechek

We Are Montpelier –Finale Concert

Generating Poems Workshop with Kate Fetherston

Zen Poetry workshop with Walt Ward

Poem Crostic Construction with Rick Winston

The Great American Poets: Ira Gershwin, Irving Berlin, et al with Jim Hogue

Open Mic Poetry at Bear Pond Books

Poem In Your Pocket Day

Poetry and Food with Jesse Lovasco and Lise Mase

Card Catalogue Poetry

Our walkable anthology of contemporary Vermont poetry will be on display in downtown Montpelier throughout April.

Program books will be available in April.